This is a lonely wolf hiding from something, he was scared when he, looks like he stole a lunch box or its his, its maybe around midnight in the woods where the friendly creature seems to be hiding.this is my piece of writing on pobble 365 i found it hard because i am not used to writing about pictures but i guess its good to learn about new things my goal next is to work more on pobble and find more interesting photos
Guten Tag Shontayne,It's Mase sitting right next to you. I have enjoyed this writing about wolves. It's got some good reflection on language. Maybe next time you could write a bit more,as it's a bit short. Anyway,Hope ya have a good day and i'll talk when it's lunchtime :p
ReplyDeleteHi Shontayne, what a cool picture to choose to write about. Try to add a bit more descriptive language to help the reader paint a picture. Why was the wolf lonely, hiding and scared?
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