Monday 4 March 2019

USA!!! Florida/Orlando Free writing

On the holiday i went to the USA!!! Florida/Orlando for a whole month.

On December 28th 2018 i was getting ready for my 11 hour flight to Orlando/Florida, it took us 15 minutes to go though security before we could head on our flight they checked our bags for food or drinks checked our passports and after out wait we walked right to our plane my heart was racing, I was getting existed to get on our plane and getting ready to take off.

When we sat down we waited like 19 minutes for everyone to get on when everyone got on our planes engines make a big "ROAR" when they started up i was getting really hyped before we were taking off the announcer announced  the safety pro cations  after they were finished we were moving, when we got on the runway engines went full throttle  plane when zooming across the run way i was thinking "what if we fail the run and go straight into the water" but we had a successful take off and then our 11 hour flight began.

I stayed up the whole thing its was funny because the day we left was the exact day we got there to USA, so we left on the 29th of December and go in to Las Angeles on the 29th of December on the plane they served us dinner breakfast supa and though out the night there was a shop of free food they had lots of options of drinks and food there was no alcohol severed on the plane, we landed in Las Angeles on 29th December 9:15 am we spent 2 hours going thought security because american are more serious about things there than here in new Zealand.

2 comments:

  1. I love that you focused on just the flight for this piece... I hope we are going to hear about different parts of your trips over the next few weeks. I also like that you are trying to use descriptive language to make your writing more interesting e.g. 'my heart was racing' and 'full throttle'. How lucky are you to have such an amazing trip for your holidays. Was it snowing over there??

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